A Cacophony inside me

I stare into the void,

Reviving the sweet memories shrouded from the world.

An ocean of turbulent thoughts inside me,

Betrays the tranquility so displayed.

But into that void,

Is a pair of eyes,

giving a penetrating look that feels like a slap.

Back into the material world, it dawns upon me that;

Even the mind has its own way,

to make you forget the obscure archives,

where you had stacked those shreds of yourself,

once you discard them to get over it.

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‘What is this?’ must be your question.

No rhymes….no specific pattern…. Nothing.

Actually I’ve never done poetry. And these words just came to my mind out of the blue when i was….(staring blankly at the walls πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)

Thanks for reading and please do share with me your valuable feedback.

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16 thoughts on “A Cacophony inside me

  1. Beautiful!! This is known as a blank verse. Even though it has no rhyming words, it has a nice poetic rhythm to it. I’ve always felt that blank verses are more difficult to write than regular poems. Would like to read more such ones! Great job!

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    1. Thank you so much 😊
      I don’t know much about poetry. And this one was not even framed. The words just happened to come somehow in the dark and silence of the night πŸ˜…

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  2. I am no poet but I feel as long as it is meaningful, it can be labelled as a poem. 😊 Even I have written a few of these kinds – no rhyme no pattern, and I have tagged it under poems πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰

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